This is what our initial effort looked like. As you can see, it clarifies what adjectives and adverbs are but also illicits deeper thinking and wonderings. We have not managed to unpack the 'Analogy' section to develop effective metaphores and similes but will use that next term. This Desciption Collector resulted in 'Slow writing' and 5 Sentence Challenge responses. It is a tool to feed any type of written response.
The Year 1-2 teacher came for a visit and we decided it should be simplified for them. She had tried a version of it in her class and already had a student independently apply the 'see, think, wonder' to his writing on the following day.